QUEST
Do you know how many children wish to go to school? That’s what my quest is about. Searching for better education and great diploma.
My friend was the only person in her family who went to school. She had four sisters and one brother. My friend name is Miriam .Miriam didn’t went to school early because of her parents problems. Miriam dad was unemployed. Her brother was in jail because he stole things from people. My friend went to school at age 9 when she went to her first grade. When she wanted to finish her elementary school her mother didn’t have enough money to pay for the rent. She asked her daughter to quick to school and help her to feet her family and pay for the rent. My friend was very intelligent and brave. She didn’t want to. She wanted to go to school and became an authority. She didn’t want to be as poor as her parents so she decided to go to school in the morning. In the afternoon she came home and help her mother. After that she went home and study at 11:00 PM because didn’t want to fail her classes. In my country if you fail your classes you should retake the same grade. So she struggled to have a good grade. God blessed her and she got some scholarships. She didn’t have to pay for her high school, but she steel helping her mother.
My friend mother is so proud to her daughter. She is planning to enroll all of her kinds even if she doesn’t have enough money God will help her. This is an example for us students. We have many opportunities to success we should work hard for our future.
Good sentences, good intro. and conclusion, but Pel. TELL US ABOUT YOUR QUEST. Explain how you plan to get a good education…is that why you are happy to be in the USA?? What are your plans here? Why do you want to get a good education?
Very touching story about your friend. Yes, we have to work hard to be successful! That is the truth!
Ms. F
That is an amazing story, Pelagie. Have you struggled in your education too? –Ms. Miller